I enjoyed both excerpts on Laura and Hunter. Without detailing what happened with each, I enjoyed reading the build up to the next place both Laura and Hunter got too.
Your poetry in the end is really nice too!
Oh yeah, I agree, the first two Home Alone movies were good. It's been a long time since I've seen those movies. We enjoyed them. I'll keep that in mind for the holidays!
SIP = Story in Progress
Even though they may not remember them, everyone dreams several times a night. In fact, during a typical lifetime, we spend about six years dreaming.
People don't only dream in black and white, as was once believed.
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Poom is a 3 year old black cat and he is “mentally challenged” due to a parasite that was in his brain. He’s a fun cat and has lots of interesting things happen to him. We’ll be following his journey through life through a series of short stories.
On a moonlit night, she sits by the pond,
waiting for her lover, forever gone.
Echoes of his cries carried on the wind,
her heart breaks and her arms yearn for him
to hold her, yet once again.
On a moonless night, he sat by the pond,
waiting...
The fantastic, frivolous, fabulous frog
Sat rather flippantly on his log.
Finally feeling fantastically famished
Flicked out his tongue but the flies had all vanished.
Slipping and sliding, sideways he went
into the pond his large self was sent...
From this starter thread, https://www.literarysocial.com/forums/topic/24/fs-eversville-marsh
The banshee whispers echo through the trees at the road's edge, mesmerizing and terrifying those whose ears they caress. The bent and twisted trees, hulls of t...