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Please provide me some feedback on that book in progress. I would love to know what everyone thinks about it. Do you like/dislike the plot, characters, settings, etc and why?

Thanks in advance for any feedback provided.

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I like the premise... the idea of the primal nature of fear is something that I love to read way too much into. The only thing I'd say so far is that perhaps a paragraph or two added near the beginning would be interesting to see some more information about the kids, as you don't get time to really "meet" them before all Curakan breaks loose. Maybe as they're heading to the caves, some back and forth or chatting between them instead of introducing only one or two. A lot of description is used on the forest, caves, and things happening around them, but not on the protagonists of the story themselves. Other than that, I like the premise, the background of the Curakan, and the way it seems to be going. It's one that I'd continue reading to see what happens, which, I think, is what writers shoot for. So in that you've succeeded in beginning an interesting story.

Thanks, that's exactly the sort of info I need to work on it. I'll revise it in the coming days as I have another chapter in the works but I'll work on the characters first.

http://literarysocial.com/article/6/sip-the-darkening-mists-of-curakan/ I added the charactersstill have work to do on it though.

Loved your Curakan story, every bit of it was suspenseful and thrilling.